Issue 10, Page 30
Transcript
1: In the HQ room, Melissa is slams down her bag and gear, onto the desk.
2: Julia slowly approaches through the door, looking worried. Melissa looks too angry to talk to her.
Julia: Uh… listen, I’m sorry. I guess I got excited… I mean, there was so much down there. You should have seen it Mel…
3: Melissa turns around, emotions conflicted, getting out of the hot overalls.
Melissa: You could have gotten hurt.
4: Julia looks shocked and hurt, Melissa’s expression eases. Julia is visibly clutching her arm
Julia: If I was with you two, I would have kicked that thing’s pale ass… I didn’t meant to abandon you, I’m-
Melissa: What… What did you do to your arm?
5: Melissa puts her hand to Julia’s arm, she recoils.
Julia (off-screen): Ah! Ow…
6: Melissa has a concerned, sympathetic expression.
Melissa: You can be pretty dumb some times.
Meant to should be mean to, and sometimes is one word.